These are the feedback sheets from our pitch, thankfully we got given good feedback which we can take and work on it to improve.
Our postive comments were;
- We produced good information on our record label (RoughTrade),
- Thought about our locations well, we want Greenwich to be our main location to film. For our performance we will be filming at school, as we have the facilities such as; drum kit, bass and guitar,
- A clear idea of what we want to do. (Storyboards will be added to the blog as well as animatic here you will be to see what we have came up with and what we hope to achieve as a group for our music video),
- The idea of how we want to look as a band,
- Lastly we gave good detailed information of our backstory of our band to show how we got to where we are today.
Comments to improve;
- Where we want to film in Greenwich this could be a little tricky as we may have to ask for permission to film certain places there, also travel and health and safety,
- Our narrative needs a little more improvement.
Overall i think our feedback is positive but i know a couple of changes are needed which are in progress and will be on the blog soon.
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